Looking for Feedback on My Recent Mixes

[Mortal_Dezire]

Finally finishing up with my own projects and getting back to my mixing practice. Please take a listen to these two that I've done recently and give me some honest feedback.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/4038393/Scar%20Symetry.wav

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/4038393/Jotun.wav

 

[slo77y]

flat and too guitar heavy.

sounds like u got some good signals to begin with, but the mix pretty much sound like a "dont care rough mix" to me

 

[oroinvictus]

flat and too guitar heavy.

sounds like u got some good signals to begin with, but the mix pretty much sound like a "dont care rough mix" to me

Agreed...

 

[Mortal_Dezire]

Ok, thanks for the input. Any suggestions on how to improve?

 

[thefalloftheheretic]

That Jotun mix is super bass heavy. Pull the bass back a bit, perhaps route the shells to a parallel comp buss.