hey everyone, i have just been writing some stuff, and turns out i'm much more anal about the mix than i thought i would be :S so could i get some feedback on what you think i could improve on? also, the song isnt finished yet, so dont pick me up on that, im more concerned about the mix than the music right now 
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13612676/MAX (1).mp3
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13612676/MAX (1).mp3
