Finally my best mix yet! Deathcore mix!

[OrderedAudio]

No vocals and just a clip but I feel like this is my best mix i've done
I want opinions on the guitar tone and how i could improve it I'm kinda going for a guitar tone like this
[ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NlfeJLXPrHU&feature=related[/ame]

but this is what I have

http://soundcloud.com/orderedaudio/tech-deathcore-sample-1

Quad tracked pod
sampled drums
and DI bass ran through an amp sim

 

[dani]

the kick is really boomy and strange, it sounds like the reverb you have on the kick and the snare are just way too much. guitar tone seems alright, if not a bit a harsh, and your DIs might be slightly over edited (mutes can be a bit too sudden)

other than that you're doing not too badly..!

thanks,

 

[Armorial]

Well done man. Just ease back on that reverb on the snare and cymbals and you are getting closer.

 

[OrderedAudio]

Thanks for the responses!
I put a room verb on the drum group to try and make everything blend better but I guess it made it really boom and a bit awkward in some places
thank you!
I would still greatly appreciate more input from people!