Mmmm... I will probably be brutally honest with you (sorry if it hurts but that's for your own good), but the sound is not very good... Especially the drums... I also find strange that one rhythm guitar is louder than the other one (on the side). Anyway there's a whole place for improvement here ! On a more positive side, the vocals are fine
Definitely needs some help on the drums (compress the cymbals, give your kick more click in the EQ and turn it down in the mix!), as Brett said. Also, I can't hear any bass guitar. Try quad-tracking your guitars. Both sides should be even
Also, the guitars are out of tune.
I do like the vocals, your vocalist is a maniac!!!!