First attempt at mixing and mastering!

[Optyx]

Can anyone provide advice on how to improve the sound of this song?
it was recorded with low budget equipment, but I tried my best to make it sound the best possible! any feedback is appreciated

 

[oroinvictus]

This is pretty great for a self-proclaimed first attempt, I'll give that to you. I certainly didn't sound this good when I started out. It sounds like the mix overall is limited too hard, the kick drum is pumping pretty badly.

 

[oz_golf]

too distort !!!!!!! and everything is fighting each other. EQ them more