a LOT better, it's hearable now! and I don't mean it in a bad way, I mean you can distinguish stuff a bit more, still too much compression, check how the oh's sound when they're hit in a row... either you take that away from the composition or work a lot on the compression and turning those down, I don't feel the drums body, if I turn the volume down, I only hear the guitar and some crashes and insane compression, It's very cool for a first try, if you work on making everything lower so you can hear everything at every moment (meaning make your gain stages check and keep stuff rather low), it'll sound cool \m/