First Mix, feedback appreciated.

[AwaitTheDesolation]

So i've been picking up some things from you guys here and there. Decided to finally get some raw multitracks and do something. *Note* This mix was done mostly on my cheap monitors not the ones I have at home so there might be some things I didn't catch.

Found these multitracks on youtube actually from sam whitaker.

since this is sort of my first mix i'd like some insight on how to make it sound better and improve it.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/73842283/Mix2.mp3

EDIT:
Here's the stems https://www.dropbox.com/s/a05ttetoxr9o5iv/Structure Stems.zip

 

[JerryOfOthello]

(I know I'm rather late here) but it's not bad at all for a first mix. Personally the guitars have to much distortion. It's saturating the tone and the volume added to make them heard crushed the drums. The vocals don't sound like they have much processing (look into jst gain reduction it's a dream). Those are just my two cents I'll mix it my self later too