First Mix of a new project...

[fabz]

Hey all,

here's a first mix of my new project. Mixed too much... At the moment i'm def as it seems. Can someone please point me into the right direction?
Drums? Guitars? Bass? Vocals? Any help is welcome!!!
We're going for a more -live- sound just two guitars and stuff like that...

http://www.healing-ink.de/mix/Song.mp3


Thanks Guys!

 

[Tokyurot]

I enjoyed this mix because of the lively sound

I'm kinda bored hearing too polished vst drums, even I do that myself, haha!
But I guess it's all about what a song needs.

I prefer to hear live drums over vsts any given day because drums are the soul of a song IMO.
Real good programmers can get away with it though.

The guitars sounds abit dry/dark/muffled to me, but since you were going for a live sound,
I think your mix is completed

You could of course try adding abit more hi-end in the master eq, might give guitars some sparkle too.

 

[AudioPhile777]

its not very shimmery/present in the high end... would definitely get the highs sorted in each instrument...

 

[fabz]

Hey thank you guys!

I will try to put more highs into it and post it again.
Anything else i should take care of? Is the low end OK?

 

[fabz]

http://www.healing-ink.de/mix/Song_v2.mp3

i worked on it today! Better?