First mix to rate! Lady Gaga Cover with breakdowns, etc.

[decoys]

Hey guys,
my first mix to rate! Its an generic metalcore cover of lady gaga's paparazzi .. dont be too hard about the songwriting
After listening back on this mix I think the drums are too loud in general?! All the vocals need work too ...
Let me hear what you think of it!
markus

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/971380/papa neu3.mp3

 

[xFkx]

Drums seem really unbalanced in terms of stereo image

 

[decoys]

thanks for listening. you mean the panning of the instruments?

 

[DeclanWhite]

i disliked the female vocalist, not too bad though man

 

[decoys]

yea, the girl is singing musicals in her normal life do you think eq'ing would help to make it fit better?

 

[DeclanWhite]

it's lacking some mid fequencies, yeah but it's the timbre of her voice and the style of singing that i dont think works too well