First post/mix - SoloC, AD etc.

[Barnacle]

First post and glad to be a part of this forum, there is alot of amazing stuff made here guys.

I've been using these VST amp sims for around a month. And after buying a USB interface and Cubase le 4 I started recording stuff. I wrote this song 2 days ago and Would like to add more. Just asking people what they think, Im mixing on Headphones and PC speakers. I'm pretty sure its on the quiet side and The bass is very noticeable when I've listened back in my car.

I've been told to compress the bass guitar, its from FLstudio

Here it is guys: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=975664&songID=7872217

Would really appreciate some feedback.

 

[eternally_gutted]

what did you use for bass? boo bass from FL????
some info please

 

[Barnacle]

It's "electric" in the sytrus section. I havent used Boo bass much.

 

[slayercannibalsuffohead]

Hahaha! There is some weird shit going on with the writing, (I mean that in a good way), and overall its quite rocky. Cymbals are the only thing annoying the piss outta me, too loud, taking away from the hooks a bit.

 

[Barnacle]

Yeah, it was written in a stupid tuning. I was messing around + boredom and this happened haha.