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Tbh I don't see any improvement if I compare your movies. I don't want to sound rude dude, but it seems like you have no idea what you're doing. for how long have you been making movies? I hope you don't think that you will have success because the plot,the cuts, and just the whole movie itself is boring and badly done. AND seriously, letting people act who can't act looks always stupid.
that could have been done by any 9 year old with a camera and windows movie maker... I mean, I know some people who make films and compared to your work their little movies seem like hollywood productions... :/
all in all : the cuts and the actors are the worst. plot is mostly a matter of taste