Ghost The Victim - Abolish Us

[Robbiekmetal]

Hey Guys,
Im pretty new around here.. doesnt sound too bad.. but id like some feedback.. ive read alot of amazing info/tips on here but its still not totally where i want it to be.. just not sure what else i can do to improve the sound.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=996289

 

[Robbiekmetal]

and i clearly deleted the last chorus vocals to redo them.. and then forgot about.. either way... no worries

 

[Cold-Tragedy]

wow that drums sound funny
i was like yeah nice intro and when does the song start?
then i realised that those drums would stay like this
what did you use for those?
did you write the drum takes? no drummer would play like that
Guitars are ok sound a bit thin from time to time.
did you double track every guitar?
what did you use for guitars
give us some info

 

[Robbiekmetal]

the drums are Superior Drummer.. all written thru Guitar Pro exported to Midi
i dont have a drummer...so this is my way around it. What is so weird about whats being played?
unfortunately the guitars are only singled ... my computer is pretty good.. but i has windows vista on it.. makes it very difficult to work with. Im pretty sure Vista is the issue.
I'll try doubling the guitars... but just for working on what i have so far.. its going to LAG big time, and crash...
even as i have it now.. i cant play all the instruments at once.. which makes it VERY difficult to get a proper mix

 

[Robbiekmetal]

i definately posted this song waay to prematurely.