Hardcore metalcore mix, tell me what you think.

[ChristopherJames99]

I tracked this a few weeks ago, i feel theres some things that really need to be fixed but at this point i just cant put my finger on what needs to change, let me know what you think.
thanks.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13978357/By the shores of acheron new newst LOUD.mp3