Hardcore Song - What do you think?

[broken frontiers]

http://www.mediafire.com/?y8sbvuo68y30f58

Guitars are JCM 800 with 2 SM 57 (on and off axis).
Kick is Slate 10
Vocals is AT 2020 and compressed to no end

I m not quite satisfied with how it sounds at the moment...
Any tips would be appreciated guys!!

 

[ApeScaleConflict]

I don't really dig kiddos sounding like their raging on their room for being grounded. But the song is okay. I don't have any critique as hardcore can sound as shit as it can. This is not shit and sounds like hardcore, could be more balls but hey, style isn't obviously hardcore METAL so forget that. I dig the guitar sound!

 

[broken frontiers]

Do you mean more balls = more bass (60 hz) or more punch in general?

pretty difficult to mix this one, because the band wants it to be more raw and kind of sloppy..... i don't.