haunting song

[PiercedFromWithin]

Here's something I composed...I think it's kinda haunting...

Anyway here's the address to a midi I exported from Guitar Pro. (I don't have what's necessary to record)

Let me know what you think

http://www.angelfire.com/weird2/piercedfromwithin/Lost_Inside_Satan_s_Maze__Feel_Thy_Endless_Pain_.mid

copy that into your address bar and it should work

 

[PiercedFromWithin]

Dammit, I'm having a problem with the link

 

[PiercedFromWithin]

Cool, it should work now

 

[MadTinus]

A login/password is required to open this URL...

 

[PiercedFromWithin]

Oh damn!

 

[Morningrise]

Well it wasn't bad, but it sounds very amateur. I can tell you are a beginning writer. It dosn't really go anywhere, but has some interesting ideas in terms of dissonance. One of the things I was told when I first started writing was to try and make a song a complete circle, keep that in mind. Not a bad idea for a song, but nothing ever happens.

 

[PiercedFromWithin]

This isn't the kind of stuff I write usually, I tried to do something different on this. I wasn't expecting great comments...

Perhaps I'll post some other stuff I wrote later

Anyway, thanks for commenting

 

[Morningrise]

I would like to hear more stuff. Contact me sometime, or post it here.

 

[PiercedFromWithin]

Yes! I'll post some more...but it's just that since I don't have any recording material, I can just make these fucking midis out of guitar pro and so I gotta write all the bass and drums (which I suck at) and it's kinda long...