Precious Lost...a song by me

[PiercedFromWithin]

So here's another song I wrote.

It's much better than the other one I posted IMO...

Just keep in mind that this is a midi and that it's hard to put emotions in it! The drums may sound bad at some places but that's cause I suck at it...

just copy this address into your browser:

http://www.angelfire.com/weird2/piercedfromwithin/Precious_Lost.mid

Comments are always welcome

 

[Scytheman]

Kinda near melodies man. Would like to hear it with guitars and shit...

 

[JesusChristPose]

I enjoyed it. The theme running through it was catchy. You have talent, indeed.

 

[PiercedFromWithin]

Thanks,

I would have liked more replies though

 

[Auster]

Wow!! C'est du bon stock!! c'est pas facile de faire bien en midi, le son est pas merveilleux, le talent prime!!! Tu joues du clavier seulement?? t'as un groupe?? Je suis drummer mais blessé au bras =\

 

[elm lateral]

I think what Auster is saying is "fucking brilliant man"

Correct me if im wrong?

 

[Auster]

Yeah i kinda said that, i said it is some nice stuff.. I am from the same location as he, so i asked a few questions, i may know him...

 

[elm lateral]

Ah righto man.

Cool, it is good. Would be good to put some guitars and bass in. Not too mention some more significant drumming?

 

[elm lateral]

Sorry, significant as in...hearable?

Eheh. T'would be a fun project to work on.

 

[Auster]

yeah the drums need some work, but he warned us ehehe ;D.. that's one of the reasons i replied to the thread.. If my arm wasen't screwed i would propose myself to help, i hope it will get better soon, i'm starting to get depressed after 3-4 months playing only bass drums eheh

btw use the language tools on google.com if you wanna know what i said

 

[PiercedFromWithin]

By the way, I play guitar and this song is actually played on guitar...there's no keyboard on this song

 

[Auster]

oohh!! i listened at your song again, you got potential!!!!!! ;D, Hey did you know Opeth is going to be at Montreal sunday 19 January? I'm at Qc city, i'll go if i'm not buried in work..

here is some of my works (ESKER), it's old, not tight and recorded on a rehearsal but that's all i got for now, we want to record as soon as my arm is fixed;
http://artists.mp3s.com/artists/490/esker.html
Ordalie is the best one to get of these's 2 IMO.. Résurgences get very good after a min, i don't like the 1st riff ehehe..

but my other band album (VENEFICIUM) is almost complete so we should release it soon

 

[J.]

pretty cool