Hello. First post. Criticize this Mix

[LunyAlex]

Hey everyone! I'm new here. I've been lurking around these forums for some time now; I find it to be amazingly useful for the amateur "home" musician.

This is my first mix that I think would be worthy of posting. Song isn't much, just a little test tune I made yesterday.

I'd appreciate some criticism and advice on it if possible.
I used
Cheap BC Rich ASM1 > Line 6 Ux2 > TH2 Amp Sim > Comp > EQ
Superior Drummer 2
Trilian Bass
Vocals through SM 57.

Notes :
- I Suck at mixing bass.
- I Suck at mixing vocals [thus I shall also link an instrumental only version]
- I'm not a good vocalist.

http://soundcloud.com/lunyalex/glaciation-vocals


[With Vocals] (well actually it's just a long scream)

http://soundcloud.com/lunyalex/glaciation-1

[Without Vocals]

Hm, need to learn how to embed soundcloud links.

Thanks in advance.

 

[LunyAlex]

Friendly Bump
(hope this ain't against the rules).