help me improve my mix

[clarbaden]

https://dl-web.dropbox.com/get/Public/popop.mp3?w=0f955215

mainly its vocals that im strugling with, i can never to get them to sit right.
and i know some of the vox are out of tune, i will have to re do them tomoro.

Guitars are tsex30 with hack impulses
bass is pitch guitar
kick is slate, snare is a one i found on here, and toms and cymbals are ezdrummer (lol), im using ezdrummer coz i wanted a better tom sound but they kinda suck so i will be changing it to slate.

 

[RLab]

The link is 403'd

 

[clarbaden]

https://dl-web.dropbox.com/get/Public/popop.mp3?w=0f955215
fixed : )

 

[oroinvictus]

Still getting a 403, copy the public link.

 

[clarbaden]

http://soundcloud.com/clarbaden/popop

 

[clarbaden]

bumppp

 

[clarbaden]

update: http://soundcloud.com/clarbaden/popop2-1

 

[Tesseden]

I guess i'll respond since no one else really has.
Everything sounds good but the cymbals sound really awful, you need to add some humanization. also yeah like you said the vocals need some work. overall though it sounds pretty solid.