Help my mix out!

[Masticore]

I started an Opeth cover a few weeks ago, and I'm wrapping it up. Hoping I could get some opinions or advice on my track. I tried to keep levels and stuff the same as on the record. Vox otw soon.


Updated- http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3825188/Deliverance2.mp3

Any help/tips/advice would be killer.

 

[AerialThesis]

I like how you high passed everything to let that kick's low end envelope the mix, but i think you over did it a bit. It's really too present and it takes my concentration on the mix away. The rest is rather fine i like the live feel.

 

[Masticore]

OK. Lemme try and see if I can work on that for starters. I thought it was all a bit mashed sounding. Is it cool to try and bring out a little more clicky on the bass drum?

Heres an update, I didnt get some of the harmony parts up to the right levels, wanted to work on getting the drums working with the main riffs correctly. More advice/comments /tips always appreciated!
BTW song is Deliverance
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3825188/Remixing Del.3mp3.mp3

 

[Masticore]

Anyone else? Many views, no comments!

Update-I worked on it more last nite and this morning. I started from stratch again. This time I'M PLEASED with the results!
PLEASE HELP ME IMPROVE-TIPS/ADVICE/COMMENTS APPRECIATED!

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3825188/Deliverance2.mp3