help!!!

This really should stay in the guitarplayer's thread only...it's nothing to do with Children Of Bodom...
 
What you have is pretty good, but it's not enough to start asking people for help imo. If you needed a riff to make two parts flow into each other better then that'd be fine but you only have an intro...
 
What you have is pretty good, but it's not enough to start asking people for help imo. If you needed a riff to make two parts flow into each other better then that'd be fine but you only have an intro...

im sorry dude...
just tought posting this was going to be helpfull:waah: