Okay,I'll post somemore of my stories here.You,Black Winter Day and others are mildly interested in my writing,so I guess I'm not totally wasting the space on this board.This Stroy is called "Here&There" and there's a long story about it so I'll just explain that after I'm done w/the story.In case you pick it up,yes,I did borrow some stuff from Cradle of Filth to put in my story-"Midian"(also from Clive Barker,I think),"Dani","Carpathia" and other things...but I am not a plagurist!I take these names and add them to my own story.....uh...just read it...
Here and There
Once upon a time there was a land beyond there was a land beyond the darkest mountians.It was the dwelling of fallen angels,nightmares and superstitions.The name of this land was Midian.There was a fallen angel prince named Danitrie who was ruler of Midian.One day,he journeyed away from his domain to Carpathia where he stayed with a princess named Felishia.Evey night,Danitrie entertained Felishia and her court tales of Midian and all of it's inhabitents.
Felishia became curious and wanted to know how her guest knew so much about the forbidden city.She found a sacred bloodstone necklace that Danitrie had given her.Felishia went over to him and spoke-"Dani,would you tell me something?"she asked .
"Anything you want to know."said Danitrie.
"There's a question that's been plauging me for some time."she began."Will you swear to answer me?-Swear on this bloodstone?"
"Yes,I swear."he promised."What is it you want to know?"
"I want to know,Danitrie,how you know so much about Midian."
Danitrie paled.
"Give me the truth,Dani."Felishia commanded.
"I know so much about Midian...because...I am from Midian,"he confessed.
Felishia gasped.But Daintrie kept talking-
"I am a fallen angel prince.I fell because I tried to steal God's ruby ring and I had already stolen from the purses of other angels.But I was caught and banished to Midian."
"Take me to Midian with you,Dani."she begged.
"No Felishia,I can't possibly take you."objected Danitrie."Midian is the dwelling of evil.You are not evil."
"You aren't evil,either,Dani.Stealing doesn't make you evil,not to me."said Felishia.She kissed Danitrie on his dark red lips.Please take me to Midian with you."
"No,I just can't."he told her finally.Then Danitrie run out towards the steel black mountians.Felishia fell against the door frame sobbing.She got up and walked down to the wine cellar in the catacombs of her castle.Felishia found an ancient bottle of wine that was heavily laced with poison.She drank the whole bottle in less than a minute.She wiped the last few drops of wine away from her lips and collapsed,crumpled on the cold stone floor.Something like Dani's name was the last sound that left her mouth.
Imagine how surprised Danitrie was when he saw Felishia waiting for him inside the gates of Midian.
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Yes,more of a "gothic fairy tale" than something truly morbid...but I still consider it one of my better stories.
Here and There
Once upon a time there was a land beyond there was a land beyond the darkest mountians.It was the dwelling of fallen angels,nightmares and superstitions.The name of this land was Midian.There was a fallen angel prince named Danitrie who was ruler of Midian.One day,he journeyed away from his domain to Carpathia where he stayed with a princess named Felishia.Evey night,Danitrie entertained Felishia and her court tales of Midian and all of it's inhabitents.
Felishia became curious and wanted to know how her guest knew so much about the forbidden city.She found a sacred bloodstone necklace that Danitrie had given her.Felishia went over to him and spoke-"Dani,would you tell me something?"she asked .
"Anything you want to know."said Danitrie.
"There's a question that's been plauging me for some time."she began."Will you swear to answer me?-Swear on this bloodstone?"
"Yes,I swear."he promised."What is it you want to know?"
"I want to know,Danitrie,how you know so much about Midian."
Danitrie paled.
"Give me the truth,Dani."Felishia commanded.
"I know so much about Midian...because...I am from Midian,"he confessed.
Felishia gasped.But Daintrie kept talking-
"I am a fallen angel prince.I fell because I tried to steal God's ruby ring and I had already stolen from the purses of other angels.But I was caught and banished to Midian."
"Take me to Midian with you,Dani."she begged.
"No Felishia,I can't possibly take you."objected Danitrie."Midian is the dwelling of evil.You are not evil."
"You aren't evil,either,Dani.Stealing doesn't make you evil,not to me."said Felishia.She kissed Danitrie on his dark red lips.Please take me to Midian with you."
"No,I just can't."he told her finally.Then Danitrie run out towards the steel black mountians.Felishia fell against the door frame sobbing.She got up and walked down to the wine cellar in the catacombs of her castle.Felishia found an ancient bottle of wine that was heavily laced with poison.She drank the whole bottle in less than a minute.She wiped the last few drops of wine away from her lips and collapsed,crumpled on the cold stone floor.Something like Dani's name was the last sound that left her mouth.
Imagine how surprised Danitrie was when he saw Felishia waiting for him inside the gates of Midian.
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Yes,more of a "gothic fairy tale" than something truly morbid...but I still consider it one of my better stories.
Oh well,I guess it'll all work out for me someday.
