How does this mix sound? (the ghost inside, terror ish)

[Tim HLAH]

This is my first mix for an ep im working on. Im looking for advice on areas to improve this mix. Drums are live tracked but shells are replaced with slate, and gtrs are podfarm.

Do you guys hear any areas that could use improvement? Thanks.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/9173449/monarch/sink or swim july 6 b.mp3

 

[RichMinerva]

you could start by editing those guitars a little bit better

 

[Tim HLAH]

thanks. however, they arent edited. Do you think they are played too sloppy?

 

[gabriel g.]

edit those guitars and where is the bass guitar?

otherwise it sounds fine