Hows my Death Growling?

[dekayedkonscience]

This is just a sample of my low death growl, I've been growling for a few months now, started when i was 17 Im 18 now, do i have room to improve? whatya guys think?
http://soundcloud.com/dynomusicxd/a06-30-12-12-50

 

[lelahel]

link doesn't work

 

[dekayedkonscience]

link doesn't work

Sorry, try now.

 

[StefTD]

there's alway room to improve-especially soundwise in that sample, sound quality is just too bad to tell you
anything constructive imho, doesn't sound that bad but a better sample would help alot.

 

[jackbraglia]

my cell phone makes better recordings

 

[dekayedkonscience]

my cell phone makes better recordings

Thats ironic, I recorded this with my phone.

 

[avrinder]

Sounds painfully quiet, and no oomph to it.

 

[jackbraglia]

Thats ironic, I recorded this with my phone.

hahha ohhh shit man, well it might be time for an upgrade. but anyway, you're definitely on the right path with the gutturals. you have the sound, but what your lacking is the power. don't be afraid to get loud, push more air from your diaphragm and really put your body into. ya know, work up a sweat. you'll notice a difference