How's this for editing?

[Laneismusic]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/6418015/Artificial motive test 1.mp3

Think I edited that breakdown part too tight? i thought it was sounding nice. But idk!

 

[masque-]

it's pretty tight. I'd back it off a bit on some parts, but it's all preference. Sick sounding mix though

 

[Vinny]

No cymbals?
Whats up with the bass at the end?

 

[OneDaySky]

Definitely tight. Tone is dull though

 

[gotet10]

Trippy...