i think I'm slowly getting better. Check my mix.

[olif8]

Vocals sound really good but the mix needs more definition, sounds a bit ''240p-ish''.

That is an awesome way of describing lo-fi, I'm gonna have to start using it


Vocals are quite loud. The cleans started off pretty well tuning wise but start to go out as they progress, so perhaps have a look at the tuning. That being said, I think they're sitting pretty well with the exception of the loudness