In my opinion, way to heavy on effects, makes it pretty difficult to listen to. Could be cool without them, hard to tell cos itsjust going "psheowpsheowpsheow" for alot of it.
What is "no", Alex. That's all the feedback I got bra. This is so outside anything I have ever mixed or heard for that matter that I couldn't possibly be of any help. Which I would imagine goes for the majority of the guys here. This is after all the ANDY SNEAP forum. A hard rock and metal producer. You would be much better off taking this to a more appropriate forum for criticism.