Much improvement. You still might want to play around with LameFE, try setting your values for maximum bitrate for 320, and your minimum to 224. That, and make sure you're outputting to mp3!
As for the drums, well, the snare is a dead giveaway... especially on the rolls. DFH has "left hand, right hand" samples whereas it's kind of obvious your sample doesn't. Make sure you're using alternating hands on the toms as well.
Above all, randomize the velocitites of the individual hits (cymbals too). Humans don't play the same hit strengths on every shot.
BTW, I'm really liking the guitars in the new file.
-0z-