High Pass your guitars around 150hz then add some 1k-3k. The drums sound good but i cant truly tell if they are because of all the (bad) low end from the guitars and bass.
mixwise can't tell cuz I'm on laptop, but maybe you should automate the sections, the beggining as it is (with the verby feel) and the "verses" with a dry, punchy sound.
First thoughts... Thank god you didn't say djent...
My immediate next though was: I think this song kicks ass. The production seems a tad off but I'm not really in any position to give you advice in that department. Your writing and arranging, however, is very nice.
EDIT: I posted this before I heard the whole thing. The panning during the breakdown part was fuckin' cool!