Just recorded this maybe two hours ago. Thoughts?

musicwise, Fackin' brewtal!!!

mixwise can't tell cuz I'm on laptop, but maybe you should automate the sections, the beggining as it is (with the verby feel) and the "verses" with a dry, punchy sound.
 
Drums seem panned to the left. Sounds pretty good though.

Yeah my right speaker is drying and it's hard to keep a nice balanced mix sometimes. I tried my best to keep it panned pretty well though.

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Maybe I should turn the leads down a tad. That might make it sound a bit drier and more fitting for vocals.
 
First thoughts... Thank god you didn't say djent...

My immediate next though was: I think this song kicks ass. The production seems a tad off but I'm not really in any position to give you advice in that department. Your writing and arranging, however, is very nice.

EDIT: I posted this before I heard the whole thing. The panning during the breakdown part was fuckin' cool!