Learning to write/mix drums. Critique please.

[JakeAC5253]

Really pushing for better drums and stronger mixes lately, would love some advice or critique.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8838613/Death 1:16:12b.mp3

 

[caneris]

sounds pretty good man. The kick seems a little low in the mix but overall the mix sounds good. Could probably do with a bit of humanizing on the ride though.

Did you program these drums? and were you after critique on the drum parts?

cool song btw!

 

[JakeAC5253]

Yes, I wrote the drum parts too. Previous, my drum writing was horrible, so I am looking for critique on the drum part as well as the drum presentation and mixing. Thanks.

 

[caneris]

overall the drum parts sounds good, just a tiny bit sparse i think. maybe a few more accents and i think that first beat with the ride before the double kicks come in is a little bare. overall it sounds really good tho jake

 

[Tommy Evans]

Kick is too low yo! And personal taste: needs more fills