listen and flame

[Will Bozarth]

http://www.zebox.com/cgi-bin/artist...SoloSanity_-_Mindless_Betrayal_demo.m3u+qp+m4

called Mindless Betrayal, the lead at the end needs some (ALOT!) of work, no bass yet, no drums, no lyrics heh.... just pick it apart, which i state in the beginning

 

[neal]

you made it a playlist file you jackass haha. fix it so i can dl it!
-neal

 

[Will Bozarth]

woops http://zebox.com/a4/solosanity_-_SoloSanity_-_Mindless_Betrayal_demo.mp3

 

[Guerrilla]

hell yeah!!!
love the acoustic part

More comments after I listen to the whole thing...

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DETHMETAL

 

[Will Bozarth]

tnx i know its a bit repetative, but it will sound better once i get some words, drums, and bass tucked in there

 

[Guerrilla]

Yeah, I find the part after the acoustic part a bit repetitive, I like the 1st part better... good riffs... and yeah the lead sucked

Gotta listen to it some more.

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DETHMETAL

 

[Will Bozarth]

ya, the part after the acoustic is gonna be a vocal spot

 

[neal]

i have a modem. its still downloading.
-neal

 

[Will Bozarth]

 

[neal]

still downloading. so in the meantime.....
KILL!!! KILL!! MACHINE GUN MAJESTY!@#$!#@
-neal

 

[neal]

someone likes artificial harmonics haha. btw, encode in like 128 if its just shitty stuff like this. 192 fuckes over dialup persons such as myself.
-neal

 

[Will Bozarth]

shitty stuff eh?

 

[neal]

i meant demo with no bass, drums, blah blah. guitar only just so people can heard it doesnt need to be 192.
-neal

 

[Will Bozarth]

o ok hehehe and what did u think of it?

 

[neal]

sounds very bay area thrash. so if thats what you were aimin for, good job hehe. i kind forgot to pay atention to the post acustic part. ill listen to it again after im through with some more tracks off symbolic.
-neal

 

[Will Bozarth]

awesome! thanks

 

[neal]

yeh. i supose you'll re-arange it when you add lyrics and stuff. which you should. its kind of repetative yet linear. i like most of the riffs though. you just gotta organize this song.
-neal

 

[Will Bozarth]

ya, itll get organized

 

[neal]

cool. and the more i listen to it, the more the first riff sounds like master of puppets. dont go in a metallica direction.
-neal

 

[Will Bozarth]

DUDE!!! thats the 100th time ive heard that