Lost in the Tears of Reality (dont bother reading, for my reference)

[Will Bozarth]

Souls... die

Souls suffer before death

Wait...

Waiting for your agony to end

But, it always stays here with you

Cannot compromise

For, your fate is destroying you



Never see the day when you smile

Free...

You freed me from your pains and sorrow



I... cry

When I think of your pleasant face

Oh, where have you gone, my love?

Far away from me...

Don’t know what I’ve done to be

Hurting for the while...

Nothing they can do to make me smile



You...

Crushed my heart

Falsened what was true

Breaking my grip on my life

Destiny...

Torn up by a knife



But, you’re all I had

Joyous, replacing thoughts of the bad

Now, I’m on my own

Surprised how much my mind has grown

Now, my only fear...

Is no painful thought in you, dear

Wish you down to hell...

There, you’ll blend with all the other



Psychos

Murderers

Sadists

Satan



Welcome

Twisted

Nightmare

Escape



Rapists

Molesters

Nuisance

Get away



Heart...

Made of glass...

Shattered now...

This, you’ve done to destroy me

Flush...

Out my wounds...

Stained of blood...

From the steal I tasted



Pitiful thoughts of flesh

Enraptured life of death

Tortured to the end...

As you suffer in denial


The time has come for you to fade away

Distanced by a line of difference

We have grown apart from the start

What you haven’t seen is our demise



Mem’ries of all we have been through and seen

Tarnished are the once-loved remembrances

Vacant hearts – lost in the tears of fate

Lost in the Tears of Reality



Living off the tortures I have been dealt

Mirror to all I despise

Shadowed by what is not I

Why have I lost myself?



I forever...

...have started...

...raining sadness

Mental oceans...

...are regretful



Dissolved into...

...lost visions.

Broken sculptures.

Pieces crumble...

...like our lives’ rusted structures



Defaced columns…

…of my heart…

Fluid torment

Vocal daggers of destruction…

…come to take your life.


Look what you’ve done

I’ve died for dreaming...

Dreams of laughter...

Lived out sorrow



Betrayal is now your focus in life

Hellish flaring fires bursting through my eyes

Burning free your flesh to melt away my disease

Stealing now, your deepest cherished desires



Freezing yourself in time, past of laughs and more

Currently defeating all we had in store

Later on, you will see- your light has then been dimmed

That’s the time you’ll realize... I’m no longer him.


Pain feasts on me

Hunger you now feed

 

[MajestikMøøse]

hmm... expanded since I last read this... plan on reciting that one verse in norwegian?

 

[Will Bozarth]

nah, i decided to just use the english translation. the idea became rather stupid as i thought of it. 1. im not norwegian... 2. i cant pronounce norwegian hahaha...

but yeah... the song's about 2/3 complete. i think 9 minutes or so are covered by lyrics... still have that 4 1/2 to go

 

[MajestikMøøse]

Its coming along great...

Add in some screams in there at appropriate spots... Huge gutteral death screams... yeah, that would be cool.

and a couple of "Bleeeerrrrrgggghhh!!!"s as well, that can take up some extra time.

 

[Will Bozarth]

thanks

as for random gutteral screams... not sure where i'd put em

 

[MajestikMøøse]

It depends on how the riffs flow... maybe breaking into a heavy riff after an accoustic section..., maybe just befre entering an accoustic section...

just as suggestions

 

[Will Bozarth]

hahah i just started working on heavy riffs after the acoustic sections... leading back into the acoustic passages.. THATS a good idea. thanks, ill try it out next practice

 

[Tee]

...as you suffer in denial... Jesenjin.

 

[Will Bozarth]

eh?

 

[Tee]

prolly you don't know the guy.... nevermind...

 

[Will Bozarth]

k haha. hows it goin, tee?

 

[Tee]

almost even good!

Jesenjin is the only poet that can make me cry. investigate a bit, I recommend.

 

[Will Bozarth]

good to hear that you're almost good as am i... females are quite confusing. not you, someone else i know hah.

thanks alot for the recommendation, although... will i have to get it translated, or are there english translations available? (assuming that it isn't in english to begin with...) I havent been entirely up to date on my poets and their work, which is probably why my own work is on a decline. I'll look around today during Journalism class, seeing that we dont do anything there anyways.