"Machinery" - rate my song (Wagner, EZX)

[DominikJW]

Hi guys!

I'm a newbie here, but been reading the forum often, and I hope to stay here longer, because it's a great f****n place I'm a crappy guitar player from Poland

Could You please check my latest song "Machinery":

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=805837&content=music

as well as the others? The tune isn't perfect, still working on that, but I think it's listenable

 

[Element77]

Hey, I checked out machinery, and I have to say for a newbie (haha), it sounds pretty tight! Good Tone, good playing. I'm at work on my Mac, so my speakers aren't of the greatest quality, and I don't think I'm catching all the nuances. But the one thing that is sticking out to me is the china (i assume) kinda sounds like a cowbell with heavy reverb....

 

[MetallyGuitarded]

Not bad at all man. Better production/mix than my sorry ass can pull off. Guitars seemed a little bassy and the drums had an odd 'room' sound to them. Otherwise very cool.

 

[Unavailable]

Take the majority of the room sound/verb off that kick drum and this will be a great mix.

Also maybe a little bit more hi end crunch on the guitars would polish off the mix.

 

[DominikJW]

Thanks guys for support, I'll definitely take that in mind, and make some improvements while working with next song!

Anybody listened to some other songs? There are few riffs that I'm actually proud of