Metalcore-ish song!! Please crit!!

[Lintinanims]

Check it out guys!! This is a little on the lights side for me but I wanted to try something new, here's my MetalCore-ish influenced song!!

I wrote, recorded, mixed, and master this track to criticism anywhere is GREATLY welcomed!!!! If any of you guys like this please follow me on Soundcloud I'll follow back and I will be posting quite often.

[EDIT] The song is now finished!! I'm pretty happy with the ending!! Please someone give me feedback!! This is one of my first major mix and masters!!!!

 

[Lintinanims]

Actually just gathered news that my friend is gonna do vocals for me, will post a finished version of the song tomorrow!!

 

[Lintinanims]

No one?? I could really use some feedback, I want to get better!!

 

[callumstokes]

Its not bad, it sounds low quality and its clipping and pumping. The snare seems to drowned in the reverb. But its not too bad.

 

[Lintinanims]

It's probably low quality sounding because of the conversion from wav to mp3.. The clipping and pumping maybe due to over compression on the master?? I'll keep that in mind I'm still trying to work on how much compression and when on the mastering. Less room on the snare!! Noted!! Thank you so much dude!!

 

[GearMan2point0]

The Snare sounds like a "pow". Vocals sound good though! Good job mang!

 

[Lintinanims]

Thank you sir!! I actually re-recorded the guitars with a tone with less gain and new bass tone and fixed the snare as, haven't decided if I want to bounce it down and master it and post it yet as me and the guy who helped me write the decided to do a few more to help me get the hang of tracking mixing and master multiple songs and getting consistency, I'm trying to figure out the best way to go about this.. but I digress, the song sounds SOOO much cleaner now!! thanks again for the feedback it's much appreciated man!

[Edit] so I determined that the quality issue is cause of how I converted the song from WAV to MP3, any one have a way around this without having 100 mb files??