Middle Synthy Part I need help with

outbreak525

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Hello folks,
I am working on a band and they had me do a "middle synthy part" (a la '' by We Came As Romans) to fill in a gap in the song.
And what I came up with for them is pretty good, simple enough to do the job, but it just sounds like it lacks something. I performed all the instruments with my keyboard (with the exception of the bass guitar) but like I said it seems either empty or not EQd right or SOMETHING that I just can't pinpoint.

If this was YOUR track, how would you go about making this part sound AWESOME (as awesome as Intentions, if not more awesome)?

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13291790/Middle Synthy Part.mp3
 
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