Mix advice wanted

[Lance-a-not]

Hey Guys... I don't post much here, but I read and troll a bit and have learned quite a bit from the posts, THANKS!!

Anyhow, I have a rough excerpt from a project I am getting ready to final mix... ANY advice and opinions on the mix would be very welcome, THANKS!!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=503479&songID=8519658