Mix critique on a stereotypical Risecore song

[dyslexicmusic]

https://soundcloud.com/sentencedtosickness/a-part-of-me

I just think I've overmixed this to death. It's not bright or tight enough and I really don't know how to get it to sound like I want.

And it's probably obvious, but I used Superior Drummer and POD Farm. And yes, bass is programmed, I'll record real bass later.

 

[DannyHeetmann]

Guitars are a litte harsh in like the 4k-6k range, and COMPRESS DAT BASS like 10db, and add some more high mids to it..