Mix Feedback

Cymbals are too loud and you've boosted too much highs or you took the wrong eq cuz it's sound's a little harsh. Kick is burried. Guitars are okay. Try to work on the relationship of the bass with the guitars with eqs. Guitars and bass could be more defined and more in your face without sounding so scooped. I think i hear a pad at like 23 seconds. If the pad is all over the place i suggest you to put hipass filter to cut out bass frequencies because that fuck the low end of your mix if you got too much bass instruments going on.. (the interval of your song is louder than anything)

Other than that. Nice mix man. Check theses little details and it will alright!
 
Hey man, can't remember the exact sound of your first mix but I think this one is a little better! I would suggest to drop cymbals by 1 db or so. Other than that, it's definitely better than before. Keep it up dude!