Mix test cover of an Entrosolet song

[snerklepod]

hey guys, for all of those who care i decided to do a quick cover of a riff from one of my favorite bands songs. Its titled 5cm per second and its by the dude from bleeding skies.
heres the only video i can find of the original song, not too sure if im allowed to upload the original file.
heres my quick mix, https://soundcloud.com/tsukihime/entrosolet-cover-5cm-per

I recorded everything except the intro; that was sampled
guitars and bass are axe fx ii
drums are sd.2

EDIT* heres the original

 

[Mago]

that guitar really is in need for tuning....best BEFORE you hit record^^

Darren used to post stuff around here, maybe he'll see this.