Mixing feedback request (Symphonic metal)

[Synthwailer]

Hey,

I'm an indie producer, creating metal with only virtual instruments. The vocals are real, however. Looking for feedback on the mix of this new demo:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/zbd2pf7b8vgnjcc/Rest Upon The Stars Humanized Mix 2.wav?dl=0

Mostly I'm looking for a punchy and clear sound like Nightwish and Within Temptation have.

 

[vibesound]

Some of the symbols could come up a bit especially the high hat. The symphonic effects seem too loud for my taste, rhythm gtrs could come up in volume too (but they're pretty low in the night wish song i listened too as well in most places).