Mixing/Mastering feedback on this tune?

[Syle]

http://www.imusicscene.com/brahma/audio.php?p=3

Either stream off the file on top. Or scroll down the media player on the right side of the screen, and look for "Floor 6".

Anyways, just looking for some helpful feedback on what needs to be changed and mixed a bit more properly? Yes we know this song is short It's a part 1 track on the CD, and makes sense when played in conjunction with the other track.

I am thinking something needs to be done about the drums...? But I can't quite put my finger on it.

 

[AStacy2]

Pretty cool man, reminds me a lot of Tool. I'm listening on bad speakers so no real help sorry...maybe A/B it with a Tool CD or something?

 

[Syle]

ohhh, that's a fantastic idea. thanks

 

[AStacy2]

Yeah, after listening on better speakers maybe more hi-end on the drums or maybe the guitars/bass need cut because they're masking them. Also, the volume levels of everything could be more equal. Cool song though.