more stories i'm thinking of selling (out)

dreaming neon darkspot

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so yeah, even though i have yet to hear back on the first one *starts twitching* i've been writing a lot more lately and have come up with a few more short stories, not quite in the horror vein, that i think might be good enough to sell to magazines.

http://storywrite.com/story/show/60375

http://storywrite.com/story/show/60877

any and all critiques, feedback, etc are welcomed and greatly appreciated, as always.