I'd bring the attack up the snare a little bit with a transient designer plug-in though and bring it a little bit up in the mix, would bring it to the next level IMO.
Listening to the updated one, pretty cool man, and you have some fantastic vibrato I do feel the bass is a bit too mid heavy, which makes the whole mix feel a bit stuffy, but overall great job man, and damn I need to study your drum programming