My Demo - Stormy Skies

[innerdream]

Hello everyone

I have written and recorded a new song – Stormy Skies – please feel free to have a listen via the link below and your feedback on the song all areas (guitars, vocals, lyrics, melody / harmonies, dynamics etc) is most welcome

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=252119

Lyrics

Each word you speak to me makes me now believe, makes me start to dream
Sometimes the doubts still fill my mind
Was it just a dream or just another broken lie?

I will travel to the distant future, I will travel to the distant sun
Someday I’ll fly away
Now the feelings deep within my soul will be the guide into my conscious thoughts
Someday I’ll fly away

Everyday I start to cry
Searching for answers I must find
Everyday I question why
My life is like the stormy skies

Each time you come to me, deep inside my heart I feel were apart
Once we were stronger every day
Now it seems the memory has slowly ebbed away

I will travel to the distant future, I will travel to the distant sun
Someday I’ll fly away
Now the feelings deep within my soul will be the guide into my conscious thoughts
Someday I’ll fly away

Everyday I start to cry
Searching for answers I must find
Everyday I question why
My life is like the stormy skies

(c) PFM 07/11/05

 

[innerdream]

does anyone have any thoughts / views on the song?