My first album

[Perishh]

Hi guys, this is a track off the first album I have produced. I am very proud of how it turned out considering I didn't know 80% of the things I have now learnt from this forum. Only things that still bug me are vocals and the lead tone. Other than that can I get some feedback as i'm sure I will be tracking these guys again someday.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7198386/06 Hurricane Season.mp3

Cheers

 

[dcb]

well when producing an album, you gotta watch intonation. thats crucial to a pro product. next time pay more attention to that.

overall:
guitars sound very artifical and thin.
vocals get burried. drums sound artifical but still arent tight enough for a convincing performance...

to improve your work,start with intonation. next step would be to build a nice vocal chain, so they sit better in the mix and learn how to ride them.
then start listening to great guitar recordings and youll immidiately hear that yours sound overly thin and lifeless.
no offense, just trying to give you an objective opinion.

but cool use of effects overall. i like the dj stuff ;-)