My First Clip

[The Rhone]

Hey,

Here's a tune of mine. Any thought on it would be much appreciated, hey my first post to.

http://untilibleed.gothic-nonsense.com/untiliburn/until i burn.mp3

Cheers

 

[PostMortem1666]

your drums sound pretty fake. maybe you were going for that sound? everything else sounds pretty good to me. the leads at around 2:15 sound a little loud.

 

[Rex Rocker]

I agree with the drums sounding fake, otherwise, real good tone and music, man!

 

[The Rhone]

I agree with the drums sounding fake, otherwise, real good tone and music, man!

Yes I agree, I used a drum machine, is there anything I can use that might help avoid this.