my first demo track

A little too much "roomsize" on the guitar imo. How far away was the mic from the amp?
 
Vocals: me
1st Guitar: me
2nd Guitar: me
Lyrics by: me
Recorded by: me
Music by: me
everything else by: my notebook
http://files.tr00metal.com/Darkened Forest.mp3

It was ok. Enjoyable for a bit but needs improvement as I'm sure you know. For one man I won't critic so much, it was a good effort. For a band it would not be good but since you did everything yourself it's a good start. :headbang: I've heard worse vocals imo both in actual bands and in other people's demo's *cough*fetzer*cough* Good work.


:lol: @ the vocals.. everything else ok.
lol i dunno why but i find the singing hilariouse...

You sound kind of like a Parot.

raaaaaa polly want a cracker?

Maybe you could do vocals and bass for him? I remember you said you play bass in a band and that you're a vocalist who can do any type of harsh vocals (Old Alexi, Borgir, etc) but that you can't do power metal vox. I'm sure if help him I'm sure the song would be so much better :) He would appreciate that too I bet and we'd all love to hear it.
 
doesent seem to bad of an idea actually.. il try to get a microphone and some equipment for that and il contact him about it.. dont worry you guys you will hear my voice to the sound of some metalz on this forum sooner or later! :p

better yet.. im going to try to get a prog band together soon try to create a sort of fusion of death/thrash metal and progressive metal. I need to practice clean vox i want to sing clean so bad!! but im just not good at it.. but i can carry a growl :p