my first mix, tear me a new one

the guitars sound more like keyboards and too far back in the mix.

sounds a little too "plastic", too light, but I like the cymbals

like the vocals effects

its a groovy tune though

but keep chipping away it - lord knows it aint easy
 
I don't like the guitarsound... it's to weak... but the rest i okay... for a beginner. The vocals is pretty cool produced... Keep'em coming... it's not to bad!
 
That lead sound reminds me of a guy I use to know. The trait/ sound was due to his crappy guitar and amp. I don't know what was used for your mix, but it has that similar sound. If it's possible to change the guitars (re-track with better equipment), the whole mix will sound alot better.