My first song (Obituary cover), comments appreciated!

[jamvanman]

Been hanging out here a while trying to learn what its all about. This is my first go at a song. Its the Obituary cover that muckypup1 kindly uploaded a little while back.

My guitar playing is pretty rough compared with you guys but still this stuff is good fun after work!

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8620240/Slowly We Rot Cover.mp3

Comments and advice much appreciated.

 

[muckypup1]

The bass sounds like its been playing in a different tuning, like half a step too high maybe?