Need a Mix and Song Critique!

[Small_hand20]

Hey fellas this is a softer song I've been working on for a little while now. It's not complete just yet but as I often have writers block half way through a song I would love a mix and song structure critique. The structure I was somewhat going for was a Karnivool/Circa Survive type structure. Sort of. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

 

[NickLAudio]

Sounds good! Definitely something I could chill out to. Solid mix too.

Maybe highpass the clean guitars. If highpassed already, push it up a bit more.

 

[Small_hand20]

Word. I appreciate it man. I plan on getting a good singer on this pretty soon and actually finish the song. Ill see about pushing that high pass up a gnats ass more. Once I finish it I'll repost it. Thanks again mate!