Need Feedback and hello! (amateur vocalist)

[Chrisholy88]

Hey Guys, i am not sure that i am right here. I am searching for some scream and shout vocalists to improve my vocal skills. I am new in this genre and i feel like my screams and shouts are not powerful enough.. heres a link of a cover of myself. Would be nice, you listen to it and gimme some feedback and tips how to do better.

greetings from germany

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Oxy-a1oVKt4&feature=autoshare